Sunday, December 11, 2022

Know the Novel Part Three: Words Written//Another Cover Reveal

 1. How did writing this novel go all around?

TGCM- it took way longer to write this book than I thought it would? Like, I fully expected to have it done in July, but it took me till December 1st to actually finally finish it. Still done is done so I'm not going to complain and it isn't as if it was a hard book to write. No, it was actually quite enjoyable, it just took a really long time for some reason.

ODAF- whelp... still working on writing this one. At about the 10k mark and freaking out wondering if it will be too short. I keep telling myself that it doesn't matter so long as the story is told to completion, but book one was like 115,000 words and book two was 90,000 and this one might be like 50,000? 40,000? Which is actually what some people say is the perfect length for a novel, with the same sources claiming that 110,000 words long is excessively long for a novel (who is going to tell RLtG?). But I'm also not too keen on having such drastic differences in lengths between books, but to be fair book one is the main conflict and the last two books are basically trying to do damage control and figuring out a way to give my characters a happy ending after what happened in book one (if you know, you know). So...yeah. Lots of existential crises, but then what else is expected when it comes to wrapping up a trilogy that you've been working on for close to five years now? (while I published book 1 in 2020, I actually first wrote it in 2018).

2. Did it turn out as you expected or completely different? How do you feel about the outcome?

TGCM- I mean, I already know that my books will never align with the perfect ideal I have in my head. Because all I have in my head are an aesthetic and a vibe and like five bits of dialogue. When I start putting scenes and words to it, the story becomes real. And to be real it must be not perfect. But with that all said, the finalized product of TGCM wound up being very similar to my original ideal. The found family came together nicer than I expected it to, there were a lot of fun parts. I think I expected it to be a little scarier, but I can always add more creepiness the next draft. As a whole I think this book balanced all its major components really well so I'm pretty pleased with the first draft I have so far tbh.

ODAF- so far...it's actually really good. Like, other than being shorter than I was expecting it's going really well. The characters are behaving exactly how I need them to. Probably because I told them to be on their worst behavior so they don't have to go against their nature. They are, at their core, evil goblins with terrible coping mechanisms and currently that is how they are acting.

3. What aspect of the story did you love writing about the most? (Characters, plot, setting, prose, etc.)

Both- Characters, it's always going to be the characters, their relationships, and of course the stuff that makes my books kissing books. I just love developing really complex characters and giving them other characters to not get along with and sit back and watch the bickering, and then see that bickering turning into them actually coming to care for each other.

4. What was your least favorite part?

TGCM- I really struggled with the climax of this one. Climaxes are, as a whole, hard for me. I always try to make something that is so huge so ground shattering and I'm usually disappointed how it turns out because sometimes I take too long to describe exactly what exactly is going on and it gets jarring or other times I feel like I don't have enough description and so no one will know what is even going on. It's a difficult balance to keep in a fast paced scene.

ODAF- there's a part in this book where a parent is a really big letdown to their kid... I HATED writing it because the parents weren't evil, they were good people who love their kids, and they made a hard decision that they thought was best. But to do that they had to do something awful to their child and now they're probably going to be hated forever by my readers and they aren't even villains. Just people who were faced with an impossible decision and thought they took the selfless option. They were wrong, of course, but they're flawed humans and my characters aren't always going to make the right choices. Doesn't mean that it was fun to write because gosh that was so hard to write about a relationship between a parent and their child being destroyed and their nuclear family unit falling apart because of it.

5. What do you feel needs the most work?

TGCM- the ending. It's a bit rushed. The last ten chapters are basically just the bare bones of the story that I was just spewing the ideas on the page and they don't look pretty.

ODAF- this will probably be the ending as well, I haven't written it yet, but my endings always need work.

6. How do you feel about your characters now? Who’s your favorite? Least favorite? Anyone surprise you? Give us all the details!


TGCM- I love these crazy kids. They truly carried the story and at some points I felt like I just had to sit back and let them do it because what they were coming up with was better than what I had. And their banter was...👌🏽 My favorite is still Conan, I love that Cinnamon Roll so much, he's just precious and must be protected at all costs. My least favorite was probably Zarynn, bro had a lot of growing to do and he is not even close to completing an arc that will continue into book 2. So yeah, he wasn't a team player and I was just like 🤦🏽‍♀️ at him quite a bit. I was actually surprised by Ikor, I expected to be a little indifferent to him seeing as he is also indifferent to everyone else, but he would up probably being my second favorite character. This socially constipated cat-loving book nerd really won me over.

ODAF- Jaye and Ravven need to be protected at all costs, these two are just... hurting. SO MUCH. And like the idiots they are, they're taking that out on each other. Thomas and Riagan are the MVPs and this book literally wouldn't exist without them. Jaye and Ravven would just spend all of eternity moping without them pulling them out of it. Keane deserves "parent of the book" award because we are not talking about any other parents in this story...Wren has always been an enigmatic figure and I look forward to fleshing her out more.

7. What’s your next plan of action with this novel?

TGCM- in a couple of weeks I'm picking up the edits of this one. It's my plan to publish it March 15th so I need to do the second draft, send it to my editor. Then it will go out to my formatter and ARC readers. Then it will be released to be read by all of you guys!


ODAF- Well, first I need to finish it, but hopefully I'll be able to do that very soon (this week even?). Then I'm going to let it sit for a little while before I pick up the next draft. Fortunately, I have more time to let this one sit since it doesn't come out till May/June, but eventually it will go through the same process as TGCM until it too is published hopefully late spring/early summer of next year.


8. If you could have your greatest dream realized for this novel, what would it be?

TGCM- could I see this turned into a TV show please and thank you? Like along the lines of the Witcher and House of Dragon (but actually clean), or The Rings of Power (but actually true to the original story), it would have the high fantasy feel and the same focus on the wardrobe and settings... ah, oh my word I would die of happiness and then come back so that I could watch my book as a show.

ODAF- is it too much like my TGCM answer to say I want a movie for this one? Because that would be great, but to pick something more unique for this story I'd love to see a special edition of it published through a book box like Owlcrate or faecrate.

9. Share some of your favorite snippets!

TGCM:

I choke on the bite that I had just taken when mother and father both give me a pointed look. I pat my chest, trying to clear my airways. “Isn’t it a little early to begin to discuss children?”

Mother chuckles. “It’s never too early when my grandchildren are the subject.” She shakes her head with a tsk at the appalled look on my face. “By rights we should have them already but Ivan is…well, Ivan is incapable of settling down.”

“So, it falls on me? How is this any sort of incentive to be the well-behaved child?”

Now it is father’s turn to choke on his food.

I narrow my eyes on him while he coughs into his napkin. “What?”

“You have never been well behaved, dear heart,” he says, his deep voice rumbling. He reaches up wiping at his eyes. “But we love you all the same.”



I still have no idea why the king would pay much heed to a low born Highlander such as myself that he would personally order that I have such a high rank and to specifically say where I was to be stationed, but as a guard I’ve been taught to not question my orders.

Well, not question out loud. Such a thing is sure to earn kitchen duty for the rest of the year. As it is, a lot of the other guards have taken to calling me cook because I spend so much time in the kitchen. It’s a misnomer, my only talent is scrubbing pots. Leave me alone with a little bit of food and it will spoil under my gaze.



I narrow my eyes. He isn’t getting the point. Thickheaded Highlander… “Still, I wouldn’t say that sorcery is mere heresy. Just because you are immune to most magic doesn’t mean that you shouldn’t know a little more about what you are up against. Besides, a Highlander’s immunity only lasts until they die. After that, they can be brought back by necromancers same as the next person.” It does make me wonder what the magical immunity is that Highlanders possess since it only seems to work while their heart is pumping blood.

Conan dips a nod. “Duly noted, although you really don’t need to have sorcery to control me. Just offer me some cheese and I’ll be your willing servant. I’m like a mouse that way.” He shakes his head, his tone taking on a wistful note. “I’d do anything for cheese.”




“That’s just it, we don’t know them at all. But they are criminals. Zarynn is a sorcerer, and Sergei accused Ikor of killing someone—not that I trust him either.”

“The man Ikor killed?” Conan shook his head. “What did he ever do to you?”

“No, Sergei.”

“Ohhh.”

“All I’m saying is that these are the sort of men who only stick around so long as it fits their best interest. Ikor only wants his position back, Zarynn wants his freedom. They don’t care about you or I. We can’t rely on them to actually have our best interests at heart. Right now our goals align, but the second they don’t we’ll be on the chopping block.”

“I suppose my trusting nature got me into this mess in the first place.” Conan turns to me, a soft smile on his lips. “I’m with you, Alya, and only you. Whatever you choose.”

I nod, feeling a certain amount of tightness loosen in my chest. “And I have your back, Conan. No matter what.”

“It’s my front I’m a little more worried about. I’d hate for something bad to happen to my face.” He reaches up and rubs at his jawline.




“And I’m not sure you understand how special you are.” He tilts his head. “You’re like these flowers. The world is ending, people die, monsters could be out there and yet here they are. They’re blooming. And they remind me of you, how you can continue to be beautiful and brave despite everything that has happened you have not allowed that to dampen you. You make the world a brighter place.”

“Beautiful?”

His cheeks color. “I mean objectively.” He gestures at my head, it’s a short jerky wave of his arm. “Like the flowers. I’m not flirting by calling the flowers beautiful am I?”

“The flowers can’t kiss you if you do.”

Conan is on his feet in a second, his cheeks alight in the fire. 



ODAF:

I tighten my fingers around the lip of the well, my sinews growing white and strained. “What…did you do?” I demand, my voice coming out gravelly and raw. It barely sounds like me.

But then… am I really myself now?

Ravven’s eyes are wide and brilliantly purple. “You’re beautiful.”



Ravven waves his arm out. “You’re acting like the worst thing both imaginable and unimaginable has happened. You’re pretending that you are innocent in all of this and didn’t deserve a thing that happened to you.” He narrows his eyes. “And think I’m evil. You may have closed your thoughts from me, but I can still feel your emotions…” he trails off, glancing down. Now his eyes have settled to a deep blue. “I can feel your anger, your revulsion, and your… hate. Why do you hate me, pest?”




“Good people get scared.” Wren pushes away from the wall. “It’s why I stopped being a good person long ago.”

10. Did you glean any new writing and/or life lessons from writing this novel?

TGCM- leave room in your schedule for the unplanned... like a book taking an extra four months to be finished.

ODAF- sometimes things come to an end and while it can be sad, it can also be a good thing.


And now, just like I revealed the new cover for Of Gold and Iron in the last Know the Novel I did, here is the new cover for Of Stars and Shadows that was designed by Miblart...

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My gaze flicks up to Ravven who is resting with his eyes closed, pale and gaunt just a shadow of the former self he was only days ago. “So, what is your plan? I’m assuming that you have a plan.”

“More like a gamble.”

“And I’m part of that gamble? Are you sure that is wise? You know, considering our somewhat twisted history?”

Jaye MacCullagh may be the Fair Assassin now, but her troubles are far from over. Even though she killed the faerie enslaving her brother, she and Thomas are still just as trapped in the Otherworld as before. Only this time by the deceitfully glamorous Sidhe faeries of the Spring Court. Returning home seems like an impossible dream, especially when Jaye discovers that Ravven Crowe, the king of the Spring Court and her soulmate, is still alive… if just barely. Ravven needs Jaye’s help to discover how he survived, and how to stop himself from dying again. He is fading away and somehow Jaye is weakening alongside him. The only hope for either of them is for Ravven to reclaim his immortality by becoming a faerie again.

However, there is only one way for mortals to turn into faeries. They must drink from the well of Stars and Shadow on the night of the Feast of Starlight. Each court has a way to the well, but they guard it fiercely to keep just any human from becoming one of them. With every other way to the well barred, Jaye and Ravven are left with only one option. They must enter a deadly labyrinth created by the Spring Court. If they can survive and if they can make it through to the other side, the well is theirs. But in the faerie world, nothing is that simple. Especially where the Spring Court is concerned. Forced to trust the man who ruined her or risk losing him forever, Jaye struggles with her convoluted feelings toward both Ravven and the faerie world. However, when her family arrives looking for her, Jaye feels further strained. Everything Jaye has ever cared about is at the mercy of the Otherworlds, and she can’t shake the feeling that no matter how hard she fights to win she is going to lose this time.


I'm changing the cover this week so keep your eyes peeled for when this shiny new cover goes up!

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2 comments:

  1. Hi yes can I adopt Conan please and thank you??? I already adore him. So, so much. I mean those SNIPPETS. “I’d do anything for cheese.” I CANNOT. ALL the snippets from both books were just gold. Every single one of these characters sounds like such riots!

    Thank you so much for joining Know the Novel and sharing all of this! I always love hearing about your epic stories. Congrats on finishing TGCM! I hope edits and wrapping up ODAF go wonderfully!

    Also that new cover. *heart-eyes* Sooo pretty!!!

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    1. *pulls out adoption papers* Conan mother doesn't appreciate him enough and I'm certain that you would do much better job. It's surprising how many of my characters are foodies nowadays. I'm glad you liked the snippets!

      Thanks so much for hosting! I always have such fun Know The Noveling. Thank you!

      Isn't it just??? *stares at it forever*

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