So NaNo has begun, and Rage Like the Gods has basically consumed my life. When I'm not writing, I'm brainstorming (to keep up with the fact that I am actually pansting this novel and need to come up with scenes on the go), when I'm not doing either of those I am drawing my characters. My calculator is getting quite a bit of use trying to figure out word counts, and I think I may drive my close friends and family mad with how much I talk about where I am at or where I am stuck in my writing. With that said, I thought I would share a little more about this book that is essentially my life right now.
To pick the topics I would discuss in this post (I was planning on doing a few posts like this, but this ended up being so long that I think I'm only going to do two. One at the beginning of November and one at the end) I had my two besties R.F. Gammon and Lila Kims, cook up some questions for me to answer about my story's plot, world, and characters.
-Tell us about each of the main characters but like...in a realistic way not a summary way
This is a mean question, because I like to talk about my characters in summary ways. But I suppose if you want the summaries you will just have to go here where I first introduced them. Anyway so I have 5 POVs in RLtG (one previously not listed in the other blog post because that POV is slightly different from my other four), so I'm going to focus on the POV characters (of book one, there may or may not be another POV added in book 2 but you didn't hear it from me XD) since well, they are my main characters
(this image and the ones below are my [finally finished] Inktober project in which I was drawing my characters from RLtG but in modern clothes cause why not)
Thyre: Thyre is a Highlander, fiercly proud of her heritage, loyal to a fault, and not a fan of magic or really anything Lowlander (she is Highlander through and through). Her father was the keeper of a burial mound and as such she lived a somewhat isolated life what with people being superstitious and afraid of the dead (they aren't exactly wrong to be, necromancy is a thing in this world). However, when a bandit clan killed her family Thyre went on the war path. She did a cartload of questionable things to achieve her revenge, becoming quite a skilled warrior in the process. However now that she has avenged her family (and gotten on the bad side of a law or two) she doesn't know what her purpose is in life. She is a lone wolf (and becomes one quite literally *cough* lycanthropy *cough*) but she doesn't like that, she wants a family, or a pack (or both). Show her a little kindness and she will love you forever. She's just like a big ol' extremely violent teddy bear with antisocial tendencies and trouble building the relationships she desperately craves.
Dagmy: Dagmy is a foreigner, hailing from the deserts of the south, perhaps the only place harsher and harder to survive in than Ruskhazar. Formerly a member of a clan of warrior's Dagmy has since been exiled, never to return on pain of death. Labeled a coward and a traitor, the worst insults you could label someone who places honor as equaling personal worth, Dagmy is desperate to find some way to reclaim her good name and she doesn't care what she has to do in order to do it. Killing is her profession, so to survive in this new land, she makes a living selling her sword. Dagmy is taciturn, the kind to kill first and ask questions later. Honor is all that matters to her, everything else is just a distraction.
Eirik: Eirik is the only guy chosen one, but he doesn't mind. Far more at home with women who he can charm with ease, than his fellow males who have a tendency to beat him up, Eirik either inspires loyalty and hatred from whoever he meets. Eirik is actually half elf, raised by a mother who cared more about alchemy than most individuals and a hard working farmer of a father, Eirik decided that his role model should be his always drunk uncle (we never said Eirik was smart, just that he was charming). He has decided that being a bard is his passion, and considers himself the handsomest, most talented bard to ever walk the earth and that it will be a simple matter to claim worldwide fame (never said he was humble either). Unfortunately life has proven to be more difficult and more dangerous than he anticipated... and lonelier. Still with his brains and silver tongue, there's nothing he can't accomplish, at least that's what he thinks.
Meruna: Meruna is a Lowlander from a very important family, she is expected to marry well to further her father's political views, but her true passion is learning and magic. She will not accept a future where she doesn't attend the Academy of Magickers, so finally her parents relented and now she is off on her own for the first time in her life. As clutzy as she is stubborn, Meruna is a bit of disaster waiting to happen. She wears her hair unfashionably short after a fire spell gone wrong. She's a bit stuck up, and takes great pride in her knowledge of the magical arts, but Meruna is a strict pacifist and would rather die than raise her hand against a soul.
Azern: the final POV character, Azern is a bit different than everyone else. She was not chosen by one of the gods, instead selected as a chosen one by one of the only non evil demigods there is. As a demigod follower, Azern is actually a sorceress, deriving magical powers from this demigod rather than the goddess Meruna. Sorcery is mildly illegal, but Azern isn't big on following rules. A rebel at heart, she has been known to make an enemy or two with her unpopular political views. Still she has her heart in the right place and makes close friends easily, who she would be willing to die for. She is the only one of my main characters actually dedicated to saving the world. She is a Higher Elf, one of the remnants of a long destroyed culture and as such she wants to prevent other clans from going through what her people did.
-What's the world like?
So the world's name is Ruskhazar, and since this is a somewhat broad question I decided to divide the answer into four sections (in which you will discover that I have just a bit too much fun creating my worlds)
Geographically: Ruskhazar is on a peninsula, connecting it to the rest of the land mass (not much is mentioned about this land mass except that to the south there is a vast desert that is Dagmy's homeland) islands dot the sea surrounding Ruskhazar, including the closest set of islands, the Spice Isles, a previously uninhabited cluster of islands that has since been settled by Ruskhazar due to the ripe conditions for growing spices, however these plantations are greedy and unsanitary and generally the only workers are criminals exiled from the homeland. Ruskhazar itself is almost entirely locked in by mountains that wrap around the peninsula. These mountains form a natural barrier to defend their land from invaders, but also make it difficult to have large cities, and makes travel dangerous. In the center of the circle of the mountains is a fertile valley known as the Lowlands, this is where the largest cities are, and also where most farming takes place. There is also a thin coastline on the other side of the mountains, that nestles between the mountains and the sea, this area is home to fishermen, summer houses for the nobles, and the prisons where criminals wait for a ship to send them off to the Spice Isles.
Ruskhazar is far to the north and as such, can be quite chilly year round, this can make living in Ruskhazar quite difficult. But if you can look past the snow and the harsh environment it is a beautiful land with mountains on every horizon and lights that illuminate the sky at night.
Historically: Ruskhazar was originally the home of the elves. No one remembers where they first came from, but it has been the home of the two species of elves for thousands of years. The Higher Elves took up residence in the mountains, carving cities out of cliffs. The Lower Elves lived in the valley where they thrived in the slightly less harsh climate. However, the species of elves never truly got along, each believing they were the true race and the other was simply a mistake.
Then the humans came. The Khazars, a nomadic band of barbarians traveled up through the peninsula deciding to settle in the fertile valley in the circle of the mountains. Due to their much quicker reproduction rate, the humans easily outnumbered the elves in only a matter of years. These Khazars also possessed an inherent magic. Not wishing to be wiped out by these magical humans, the Lower elves allied themselves to them. Welcomed them into their culture and opened their cities to them.
Around the same time the Rus, a clan of Vikings from a small island to the north of even Ruskhazar sailed south and found this land. They set up residency in the mountains where they would descend on Lowlander villages and raid them. This continued for some time until the Lowlanders began fighting back against these Highlanders. After a long and bitter conflict, involving both the elves, the Lowlanders finally defeated these Highlanders. But after the bitter conflict the only way for both cultures to survive the harsh environment was to unite their people into their culture and so Ruskhazar was formed.
The final and most bloody conflict to take place in Ruskhazar's history was when the Lower Elves convinced their human allies to turn on the Higher Elves. Many Highlanders opted to stay out of the fight with their neighbors, and who had been their allies in the war they lost. But between the Lower Elves and the Lowlanders, the Higher Elves were decimated, their culture and history destroyed. Only a remnant was left to join the united land.
Religion: The people in Ruskhazar believe in a pantheon of five deities. These deities are...
Thyre who is the god of time, burial rights, and the guardian of Skyhold, the land of the dead.
Thyre is wed to Neltruna who is the goddess of monsters, darkness, and all things unknown
Meruna is the goddess of magic and the virtues
Her husband Eirik is the god of humanity, including all human things such as birth and death
Dagmy is the goddess of beauty, lies, and carnal beasts
There were two other gods. Twin brothers, one who created the Lower Elves and one who created the Higher. However, these brothers hated each other so deeply that they ended up destroying each other, and this is why the races of elves will never truly live in peace till the end of days.
(as you will notice, these names are probably familiar. That's because my characters are named after the gods, giving rise to the title Rage Like the Gods)
These gods had 8 children between them, the demigods. Neltruna and Thyre had six children, and Meruna and Eirik had a son a great and mighty dragon, but these demigods were considered so evil they their parents were forced to destroy them in order to save the world (there was one demigod who was not evil, but she fancied herself a guardian against doomsday and so gladly sacrificed herself to stop her siblings and the dragon— this is the demigod that Azern serves)
Since then Meruna, heartbroken over the loss of their son, had another child in secret. When the other gods learned of this they exiled, her second son, the giant, from the realm of the gods to forever be the guardian of earth to atone for his existence.
Modern Political Culture: Ruskhazar is ruled by two kings. The High King, a Lower Elf who has been in charge for hundreds of years. This High King is really more of a figurehead now, considered to be the one with more power, but lives in seclusion and rarely makes decrees these days. The Lesser King, a Lowlander, is in charge of many of the affairs of state. It is also his duty to regularly visit the High King in his seclusion and see that any of the High King's orders are followed.
Under this unified front the Lowlanders and their far outnumbered Lower Elf neighbors live under the illusion of peace. However there are many in the Lower Elf ranks who remember a time from before man and with their bitter enemies the Higher Elves practically decimated they would rule supreme. However elves do not reproduce quickly and are far outnumbered by the races of man.
It is because of this that there are some among the Lower Elves who would love to see a civil war between the Highlanders and Lowlanders, which isn't actually all that far off. The Lower King has a Highlander as one of his chief advisors, but many Highlanders consider this a paltry peace offering and this advisor a traitor to them anyway. They live in constant fear of the Lowlanders deciding that they desire to wipe out their culture as the Higher Elves culture was wiped out. Many desire to break away and become their own country again, but such sentiments are treasonous to suggest (if you could imagine). To further divide the Lowlanders and Highlanders is the fact that Lowlanders have an ancient bloodline of magic (what they consider a blessing from Meruna) and the Highlanders have no magic to speak of but are actually immune to most magic even used against them, which brokers quite a bit of suspicion on both sides.
Meanwhile the remnants of the Higher Elves, with no cities of their own, and no longer any culture, are understandably bitter for what had happened to them in the past. They are treated as second hand citizens, even by the Highlanders that are sympathetic to their cause (only because the HIghlanders consider everyone who isn't Highlander basically a second hand citizen, which makes it so difficult for them to serve kings which are not Highlanders. It is not a crime that only the HIghlanders are guilty of, the Lowlanders and Lower Elves also have great pride of considering themselves better than the other races)
So basically the social political structure is no good and despite all the clans of elves and men being currently united, they all hate it and war is looking pretty inevitable.
Whew, that was a lot and I'm sure that some or you guys are reading this with glassy eyes (I told you I put too much thought into all of this), so anyway it can all be summed up in this line from Dagmy providing and outsider's view on this social political system:
“Perhaps my home is a land of bloodshed and
turmoil, where even the simplest herder must be trained to defend himself if a
rival clan should attack. But in the very least you know who the enemy is.
There you have your brothers and sisters in your own clan to watch your back.
And enemies were not forced to live together under false harmony. This land is
like a poorly stitched tear in a fine fabric. Sooner or later it will rend
leaving a larger hole than there had been before.”
-What kind of beverages do they have
So in this harsh environment, with it's political differences, and a lot of bad blood, obviously a lot of people are gonna want a lot of strong alcoholic drinks. (my bard starts off this story hungover) we have ale and mead as the more easily bought beverage for the Highlanders, and Lowlander peasants who want to get drunk and drunk fast. The Lowlander lords will probably have vast stores of wine that they drink and provide to their guests.
We also have milk, gotta have those healthy bones. Yaks and long haired cows are a common creature in this environment.
Also unlike the dark ages, there's always the option of plain water. There are a lot of freshwater springs and rivers made from melting snow in the mountains for them to have clean water. Plus I just don't want any of my characters to get dehydrated.
-Magic animals?
well we have the gods' Meruna and Eirik's children. Their eldest who is a dragon, he is currently dead, but in a land with necromancy anything can happen. Their other son is a giant and while he isn't technically an animal, but the giant has a pet dog that he breeds to send the pups to his mother to cheer her up. One of these pups is Garth, who Hakon convinces Dagmy to adopt, is an immortal giant telepathic dog. He had a bunch of siblings, but despite being the size of a horse he was the runt and too small for the giant to send and join the goddess's pack.
There are werewolves in Ruskhazar, considered blessed by Neltruna.
Also there are vampires, considered cursed by the Night Maiden (one of the demigods who was killed). I have a whole host of other Russian inspired monsters. Not sure if those count under magic animals. Not sure if these last couple of ones did either.
The story starts off with an attack from an undead kraken.
And undead sabre tooth wolves (idk sounded cool) exist
In this draft, I have also mention frost ogres. I don't know where those came from or if they will even stay. But currently we have frost ogres.
-Who is YOUR favorite POV to write (Trick question mwahaha)
I legitimately don't have one. These POVs and characters are all so different and their stories so diverse. I love different aspects in each POV equally XD
-What's been your general approach to writing romance in this series
Time for another long and rambley answer.
So. Admission—romance is actually a huge part of this book. When I talk about Rage Like the Gods I am usually discussing chosen ones, or undead armies, or spending a hugely undue amount of time talking about how I combined Russian and Viking culture in this novel's world, that I don't talk about the romantic aspect of this book. But romance is a huge part of this book's plot. And with so many main characters, I have multiple main romances going on. Honestly now I am calling myself out for never discussing the love interests in this book, so maybe I will do a blog post featuring them in a week or two.
What you should know though is that there is no romance between the chosen ones. Each of my main characters has a love story but not with each other. I honestly see them as siblings. Besides in book one they see each other a grand total of one time. And it isn't at the end of the book. It's at the beginning. Also they're all girls except Eirik and he has one of the more romantic plots in book one (how all my chosen ones except Eirik ended up being girls, even Azern the faux one, is an excellent question, one I don't have a specific answer to, my characters came to me like this and I have since learned to not question them XD)
So I have a separate romance for each POV, that's five romances (with the addition of a sixth in book two), and as I said they are a large part of my book. Now, not all of them kick off in Rage Like the Gods specifically, but all the pieces are put into place in book one with characters meeting and Tension(TM) and Attraction(TM) in the first book (this is with the exception of that sixth POV that isn't introduced until book 2).
With so many main characters and so many main romances, my focus has been on having them all be vastly different. I have probably put as much focus on the love interests as I have the main characters (hence the need to do a blog post introducing them XD). These developing romances move at different speeds, and so look vastly different as the series progresses. Technically this book is not YA. I don't know what ages my characters are actually, never sat down to figure that out. They are definitely older than teens, somewhere in their twenties. Which technically makes this book NA? With this difference in ages, there is a lot less of the will they won't they for several of my romances. Which is why I feel like it isn't much of a spoiler to share who the love interest is in each POV. Now out of my six romances I do have two slow burns, and one love triangle-ish thing. But um... my characters actually get married in this series. Two of my main characters are married by the end of book one.
Hey in Ruskhazar you never know if you are going to die so if you find love, best to not wait *shrugs*
This story is still definitely going to be clean, it just will have an older theme.
So after that long ramble the short answer to my approach to writing romance in RLtG is,
Keep the romances unique, the love true, the tension amped up, the competition dead (jk jk), and the love interests feisty, sweet, determined, sassy, and aggravating.... respectively. Oh yeah and scream, like a lot.
-What about each of the POVs distinguishes the voices of the characters?
I could list alllllllllllll the differences I have chalked up between my characters from the way they approach violence to their differing flirting techniques but I already spent a gazillion years on the world building so I shall refrain. I will focus on just the voices of the characters.
Eirik is a lighter happier tone, he hasn't led an overly dark life, and still believes in big dreams and happy endings. He is flirtatious but actually quite innocent. He claims to be a bard, but under all of that he is still just a farmer and alchemist's son seeing the world for the first time. Eirik makes decisions based on whims and is adaptable if they don't end up working out.
Thyre in comparison is dark, her thoughts are violent and she is always trying to see what is the bare minimum she can survive with because she is used to losing everything. However she is also governed by emotions and her feelings and wants a happy ending.
Which is the main difference between her and Dagmy. Neither talk much, both are violent minded, but Dagmy is calculated and rarely dwells on her feelings. The other difference I have with Dagmy from all my other characters is that her world view is shaped by a different culture. Everything she sees is seen through the lenses of the deserts where she grew up.
Meruna thinks too much, as a scholar and student of the magical arts she is always asking questions and exploring solutions. This can lead to her losing track on events going on around her because she is daydreaming... um I mean brainstorming instead. As a pacifist Meruna is not violent at all and seeks to avoid violent encounters under all circumstances.
I haven't written any of Azern's POV yet but basically she is ruled by her desire to break the rules and rebel and hating restrictions while also knowing that her actions have consequences and she really ought to play nice.
-Has anything from your life inspired certain aspects of the world or characters?
Well obviously I don't have magic or lycanthropy or been cursed with vampirism *shifts eyes nervously* but...
Meruna is similar to me in many physical aspects. She is short, with curves and not a muscle to speak of. The most workout she gets is hauling books around which is *cough* *hack* *chokes on lung* not too far off from her esteemed author. Also she totally got her maladaptive daydreaming features from me.
Eirik is like me in his being a bard. He's always trying to compose that one song that will launch him into worldwide fame and fortune *coughs again* which is more or less similar to me with my books. He has talents and he wants to be noticed, he wants to share his talents and be appreciated for them. That's something I can empathize with for sure. Also he is terrible at similes which is a trait I also have, and isn't exactly a good one to have in either of our lines of work. Whoops. Still we make do.
Thyre and I share a condition which is known as: getting attached too early on, and also not actually being good judge of characters so why the heck are you getting attached stop it stop that now.
Dagmy and I don't have a whole lot in common actually, her partner in crime Hakon however is basically me only with magical abilities (because we're sticking to the narrative that I don't have magical powers) and a guy.
And as for the world, well my (*cough*) unhealthy obsession with diseases has influenced the vampirism in that it is basically a believed to be incurable chronic illness rather than a straight up monster as many vampire stories will have (although I could go into some of the origins of vampirism that were believed to have come about to explain contagious diseases but I shan't)
And basically the entirety of this series is inspired after something or the other, but I don't have time to get into all that and also spoilers so I shall leave my answer at this because wow this blog post is getting long (I don't know who to blame, my besties for asking such darn hard questions, or my tendency to ramble)
-Which character do you expect will be the fan favorite?
That would probably be a toss-up between Eirik and Meruna. Meruna will definitely be relatable, especially with college students since her life revolves around studying. She is a huge bookworm, I find her struggles to carry a large number of books quite relatable myself. However, Eirik is a charming, well-meaning, and smooth talking bard. He is funny and always striving to be liked and come ahead in the world. So either Eirik or Meruna. Plus they are the least stabby of these characters (Dagmy and Thyre can be kind of dark some all the time)
OKAY and we have reached the end. Congratulations on surviving that word dump. That was a lot of coughing maybe I'm coming down with something. Hopefully now you have a somewhat better grasp on this story. I'm going to try to get a post up about our lucky fellas (and Sassa) who are the love interests in RLtG next week. And as for part two at the end of this month I figured I would let you guys ask the questions this time. So comment below, with any questions you may have about RLtG and my writing of it!
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